Many people believe that National Defence and Law Enforcement should be the exclusive domain of men as these forces need physical stamina that women are biologically not endowed with. Others claim that denial of entry to women to these forces amounts to gender discrimination.
State your opinion and support it with reasons and/or examples from your own experience or observations.
Few individuals claim that National Defense and Law Enforcement should be only within the authority of men as these requires physical strength that women do not possess with. However, others feel that rejecting women to enter these group would account to gender inequality. In my perspective, I assent to the latter statement because of the present generation viewpoint and the choice to defend one's own country despite sexual preference. This essay will discuss my justifications for the stated reasons.
To begin with, the dawn of new era today has permitted women to do the same work as men. Considering the current society, people are generally looking up to women as strong individuals. To illustrate, Philippine Army has allowed women to enter the military since 1990s because of the belief that womens' vigor can be developed through proper and intensive training. Indeed, it is upon the willingness of ladies to be physically fit and able to withstand challenges ahead of them.
Apart from this, the fact that majority of females are determined to protect their state and joining the defense and police department will provide them opportunity to be patriotic. Numerous women today showcase their skills and ability in physical performances. This have led them to develop that power and be able to serve their nation. For example, female soldiers are brave enough to face battles and are willing to sacrifice their own lives for the sake of obtaining peace and order in their homeland.
To recapitulate, the asset of every nation is its people. Being one of the members of the law and defense sector is a privilege especially to women who have proven their strength that would enable them to protect their state.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, so, apart from, for example, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 20.9802955665 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 31.9359605911 138% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1445.0 1207.87684729 120% => OK
No of words: 284.0 242.827586207 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08802816901 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66722737402 2.71678728327 98% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 139.433497537 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616197183099 0.580463131201 106% => OK
syllable_count: 461.7 379.143842365 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.5672299902 50.4703680194 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.214285714 104.977214359 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2857142857 20.9669160288 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.35714285714 7.25397266985 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230425877222 0.242375264174 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0786029940207 0.0925447433944 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0804808519651 0.071462118173 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138745155876 0.151781067708 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0708079213798 0.0609392437508 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 12.6369458128 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.1260098522 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 11.5310837438 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.32886699507 112% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 55.0591133005 154% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 80.0 Out of 90
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