Many people think regions affect successful persons. What are your opinion about native regions and accomplished person influence on the regions they belong to?
Recently, region effect on individual's success has sparked an ongoing controversy, which inevitably leads to a moot question "what are the influences of native regions on person accomplishment?". Whereas it is a widely held view that regions has a strong influence on individual's success, I will discuss controversial aspects of that throughout this essay.
From the culterual environment standpoint, major success is bound up inextricably with professional job, which indicates it leads to both original nations and physical birthplace. As a well-known example, a longitudinal study conducted by eminent scientists in 2018 demonstrates the relationship between remarkable accomplishment and substantial migration as well as an exponential increase in life style. Their academic criticism was impressive. Consequently, my empirical evidence presented thus far supports the contention that the likelihood of a wealthy neiborhood is correlated positively with not only urbon areas but also local places.
Within the realm of society, without the slightest doubt, peasful residential niborhood attribute to learning environment, in that it would come down to job opportunities, high income, and respectivity. A salient example of such attribution is a slung area, which is a cause for concern since it was mistaken to take rural resident for granted. Had there been a paradigm shift earlier, scholars might have had the opportunity to pinpoint native regions problems. Likewise, hardly had they confined their attention to a range of facilities, city area, and even educational opportunities. Hence, it is reasonable to infer the pivotal role of native environment.
To conclude, as for myself, as the saying goes "all's well that ends well," after analyzing what elaborated above, I firmly believe that native regions have not the very important influence on person's success. However, with the benefit of hindsight, we conceive the more we research, the further we discover.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
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Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , &apos
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, hence, however, if, likewise, so, thus, well, whereas, as for, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 31.9359605911 119% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 5.75862068966 226% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1706.0 1207.87684729 141% => OK
No of words: 297.0 242.827586207 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.74410774411 5.00649968141 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.36186139354 2.71678728327 124% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 139.433497537 146% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.686868686869 0.580463131201 118% => OK
syllable_count: 530.1 379.143842365 140% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.6840094125 50.4703680194 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.230769231 104.977214359 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8461538462 20.9669160288 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.53846153846 7.25397266985 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 6.9802955665 172% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227990526134 0.242375264174 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.067518043073 0.0925447433944 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0933955298263 0.071462118173 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139398301022 0.151781067708 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.111226554765 0.0609392437508 183% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 12.6369458128 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 53.1260098522 61% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.9458128079 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.31 11.5310837438 141% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.05 8.32886699507 133% => OK
difficult_words: 119.0 55.0591133005 216% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 16.5 9.94827586207 166% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.5123152709 162% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.