Many people think regions affect successful persons. What is your opinion about native regions and accomplished person influence on the regions they belong to?
The importance of whether one' s success is dependent on his or her native region was always a debatable topic. Many people argue that success of person don't depend upon the place he born. In my opinion, I completely disagree with this statement. The following essay would further elaborate why I am completely against this statement and will offer reasons for this viewpoint.
To start with, a variety of reasons can be offered why I am not in favor of this. First and Foremast among these, achieving success in life depends upon so many factors such as determination, discipline, clear visions of your goals and ambitions, motivation and most importantly hard work. Moreover support from family and friends would also play an important role in your journey to success. Although there is no doubt being in good and cohesive environment is beneficial, a person who is disciplined and determined to achieve his goals will find different paths to reach his final destination no matter where they are.
Furthermore, to accomplish anything in life required immense hard work and commitment.Success means earning respectable position, earning money and secured future. For example, people who marked themselves as examples for others have burnt the midnight oil for reaching desired destiny. To illustrate, people like Bill Gates, Ratan Tata, APJ Abdul Kalam and the list goes other eminent personalities are the best examples in their respective fields.
According to the arguments aforementioned, one can reach out to conclusion that people belong to native region and accomplished tasks have very small impact on overall success.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...any people argue that success of person dont depend upon the place he born. In my op...
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Message: Possible grammatical error. You used a past participle without using any required verb ('be' or 'have'). Did you mean 'bore'?
Suggestion: bore
...of person dont depend upon the place he born. In my opinion, I completely disagree w...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...ivation and most importantly hard work. Moreover support from family and friends would a...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Success
...quired immense hard work and commitment.Success means earning respectable position, ear...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, for example, no doubt, such as, in my opinion, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1378.0 1207.87684729 114% => OK
No of words: 260.0 242.827586207 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90241686679 2.71678728327 107% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 139.433497537 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.692307692308 0.580463131201 119% => OK
syllable_count: 428.4 379.143842365 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.0201485254 50.4703680194 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.833333333 104.977214359 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6666666667 20.9669160288 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.66666666667 7.25397266985 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216343093315 0.242375264174 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0712627500595 0.0925447433944 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0682108769387 0.071462118173 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133498436244 0.151781067708 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0668551991028 0.0609392437508 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 12.6369458128 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 53.1260098522 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 11.5310837438 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.32886699507 112% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 55.0591133005 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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