Many people think regions affect successful persons. What is your opinion about native regions and accomplished person influence on the regions they belong to?
Perseverance and hard work are ingredients of success. Regions play a vital role in upbringing of an individual. Although, some expertise believe native region has a pivotal part- in a person success, others believe successful individual from the region inspire others. This essay will discuss, native region having minimal contribution in a persons achievement and successfully individual from the region can be a role model.
Firstly, native region helps in overall development of an individual. However, sometimes due to lack of infrastructure and education facilities, people opt to move to a better facilitated region. For instance, students moving to urban areas for higher education. Urban areas have better transport system, libraries, and social life. Hence we can say, region may hinder an individuals growth in achieving success.
Secondly, famous individualism inspire others. They make others believe that ordinary people can do extra ordinary things. Influential people from same region can set an example for those struggling and make them believe that hard work and determination can help them achieve there goals by following their footsteps. Hence, it can be said successfully individual’s inspire others.
To conclude, this essay discussed region has little or no contribution in a persons success and successfully individual are bee seen a role models. In my opinion, successfully people play a pivotal role in inspiring individual.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 343, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...region having minimal contribution in a persons achievement and successfully individual...
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Line 3, column 334, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...ort system, libraries, and social life. Hence we can say, region may hinder an indivi...
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Line 3, column 373, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
... Hence we can say, region may hinder an individuals growth in achieving success. Second...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...gion has little or no contribution in a persons success and successfully individual are...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, as for, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 10.5418719212 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 20.9802955665 57% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 31.9359605911 66% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1247.0 1207.87684729 103% => OK
No of words: 220.0 242.827586207 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.66818181818 5.00649968141 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13351319746 2.71678728327 115% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 139.433497537 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.590909090909 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 396.9 379.143842365 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.5024630542 68% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.864239657 50.4703680194 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.1333333333 104.977214359 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6666666667 20.9669160288 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.86666666667 7.25397266985 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 6.9802955665 186% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.296542133886 0.242375264174 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106755585564 0.0925447433944 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0824929473882 0.071462118173 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198725239328 0.151781067708 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.081773823144 0.0609392437508 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 12.6369458128 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.34 53.1260098522 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.01 11.5310837438 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.32886699507 110% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 55.0591133005 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.3980295567 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.