Many people think women should be given equal chances to work and excel in their careers. Others believe that a woman's role should be limited to taking care of home and children. Which opinion do you agree and why?
Recently, the phenomenon of thinking about giving women equal chances to work in their careers and its corresponding impacts has sparked a heated debate. Although contested by many that taking care of house and children cannot be an important role of women, such an issue is regarded as thoroughly constructive and positive by a substantial number of individuals. I am inclined to believe that giving women to opt for one option themselves, and I will analyze that throughout this essay.
To begin with, there are various reasons to support giving equal chances to work in their careers. At first, remaining women in the home to care of children could make polite people for society. However, working in their expertise could introduce many talents and intelligence to the society. For instance, one of the advantages of letting women to work is making influential people for the globe such as Marry Corry.
In addition, limiting women to house works make the space of the home and family relationships warm. But working in occupations is important for family financial situations. For instance, a recent scientific research undertaken by a reputable university has shown that a working woman could help to family's well-being and the power of purchase in families.
In conclusion, while there are several compelling arguments on this topic, I profoundly believe that the benefits of equal rights for women far outweighed its drawbacks. Not only for their own life, but also for their family.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, well, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1255.0 1207.87684729 104% => OK
No of words: 243.0 242.827586207 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1646090535 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82773249435 2.71678728327 104% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 139.433497537 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572016460905 0.580463131201 99% => OK
syllable_count: 397.8 379.143842365 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.4718231643 50.4703680194 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.583333333 104.977214359 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.25 20.9669160288 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.33333333333 7.25397266985 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 6.9802955665 158% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260652493018 0.242375264174 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.09557663246 0.0925447433944 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0425621096452 0.071462118173 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151677894146 0.151781067708 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0532608338689 0.0609392437508 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 12.6369458128 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.1260098522 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 11.5310837438 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.32886699507 109% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 55.0591133005 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.