The mass media including TV, radio, newspaper influence our society and shape our opinions and characters. What is your opinion?

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The mass media including TV, radio, newspaper influence our society and shape our opinions and characters. What is your opinion?

Nowadays, mass media plays a dominant role, which has attracted many controversies and has drawn attention from the public. It is agreed that mass media has a positive impact on society, while on the other hand, stands a perspective that it has some negative consequences on their thinking. But In my opinion, mass media plays a constructive role in society. This essay will elaborate on both sides and thus, will lead to a logical conclusion.
At the outset, there are various reasons how mass media has positively affected the society, and the most conspicuous one stems from the fact that it gives freedom to people to express themselves on a bigger platform. As an illustration, mass media plays an important role for people who are shy or criticised to present themselves in a public arena. Furthermore, keeping themselves tuned to the world broaden their horizons. Hence, this shows that presenting views through status updates and twitter handles is a new way to development.
Nevertheless, there remain some drawbacks, which can certainly overwhelm the potential influence of mass media and the most alarming one roots from the fact that in the light of serious terriorist attacks, communal riots and violent civil movements mass media has adversely affected the people. For instance, it is often seen that television and newspapers demonstrate many cases of rapes, child abuse and caste discrimination which shake the trust of humanity. Thus, mass media has a negative influence on society especially younger ones.
In the light of above discussion, it is concluded that the impact of mass media is prominent, although the way it is presented can make or break the society.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, hence, nevertheless, so, thus, while, for instance, in my opinion, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 5.94088669951 185% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 31.9359605911 91% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1413.0 1207.87684729 117% => OK
No of words: 275.0 242.827586207 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13818181818 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8417198843 2.71678728327 105% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 139.433497537 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56 0.580463131201 96% => OK
syllable_count: 435.6 379.143842365 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.0689732502 50.4703680194 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.75 104.977214359 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9166666667 20.9669160288 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.25397266985 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168416831784 0.242375264174 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0662284967732 0.0925447433944 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0615155193701 0.071462118173 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0988975728262 0.151781067708 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0417563466278 0.0609392437508 69% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 12.6369458128 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.1260098522 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 11.5310837438 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.38 8.32886699507 113% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 55.0591133005 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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