Recently, the phenomenon of mass media powerful influences and its corresponding implications has a sparked heated debate. Although, contested by many that the matter of shaping people's mind is highly beneficial, such issue is regarded thoroughly both constructive and positive by many substantial number of individuals. i am inclined to believe that the growing public awareness can be a plus, i will analyse throughout this essay.
From the public stand point, channels of communication can provide the society with some noticeable effects which are rooted in this fact that media, as well as information revolution are inextricably bound up. According to my own experience, when i was a university student, I performed an academic experiment which discovered changing people's life style. thus, beneficial ramifications of both print media and visual media apparently can be seen.
within the realm of psychology, cultural influence might increase the consequences of information sharing. Moreover, the fundamental aspects of broadcasting relate to this reality that the demerits of societal cohesion pertain to degrade family relationship, as a tangible example, some scientific research underground by a prestigious university has asserted that the downside of waste time is correlated negatively with obtaining information. hence, It is correct to presume the preconceived notion of messaging applications.
to conclude, while there is some compelling arguments on both sides. I profoundly believe that the benefits of global media far outweigh its drawbacks. Not only do the advantages of internet, tv, and newspaper prove the significance of effective communication, but also pinpoint social media implications.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, hence, if, moreover, so, thus, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1474.0 1207.87684729 122% => OK
No of words: 254.0 242.827586207 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.8031496063 5.00649968141 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.30643975676 2.71678728327 122% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 139.433497537 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.688976377953 0.580463131201 119% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 379.143842365 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.8800384193 50.4703680194 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.833333333 104.977214359 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1666666667 20.9669160288 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.41666666667 7.25397266985 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.33497536946 150% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.105597913243 0.242375264174 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0350425263339 0.0925447433944 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0371590559213 0.071462118173 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.058305597921 0.151781067708 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0257122786919 0.0609392437508 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 12.6369458128 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 53.1260098522 63% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.9458128079 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.36 11.5310837438 142% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.21 8.32886699507 135% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 55.0591133005 191% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.94827586207 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.5123152709 162% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 80.0 Out of 90
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