Essay topics:
Me in past vs. Now
The prominent things which were important when I was thirteen years old are completely different from what is important now. When I was thirteen years old, my aim was to get a high score in Kankor exam. I used to wear new and fashionable clothes. I hung out with my friends every day, and I was so interested in watching TV. However, now, I want to get a high score in TOEFL iBT. I am also concerned to study and work with my computer, and I aim to have simple and formal dressing. I think as the time passes by, my appetency becomes more different.
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| 2019-06-17 | Rohullah | 100 | view |
| 2019-06-01 | venkatesh1018 | 33 | view |
Essay Categories
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, as to, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 6.10837438424 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 20.9802955665 62% => OK
Preposition: 13.0 31.9359605911 41% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 5.75862068966 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 449.0 1207.87684729 37% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 105.0 242.827586207 43% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.27619047619 5.00649968141 85% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.20108587294 3.92707691288 82% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.512914489 2.71678728327 92% => OK
Unique words: 70.0 139.433497537 50% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.580463131201 115% => OK
syllable_count: 140.4 379.143842365 37% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.57093596059 83% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 3.65517241379 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6551724138 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 20.5024630542 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.5446787462 50.4703680194 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 64.1428571429 104.977214359 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 20.9669160288 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.28571428571 7.25397266985 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.12807881773 24% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0493552071963 0.242375264174 20% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0233279930218 0.0925447433944 25% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0379916733516 0.071462118173 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0493552071963 0.151781067708 33% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0609392437508 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.2 12.6369458128 49% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 53.1260098522 154% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 10.9458128079 51% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 6.95 11.5310837438 60% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.79 8.32886699507 82% => OK
difficult_words: 16.0 55.0591133005 29% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.94827586207 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.3980295567 77% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.5123152709 67% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 200 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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