With the burgeoning growth of digital development, Internet has integrated into everyone’s life. There is a heated debate on whether people should stay connected on social media for twenty-four hours a day. As far as I am concerned, I am of the opinion that the argument has both advantages and disadvantages.
First and foremost, remaining associated with social media all the time keeps people updated with the latest information. In other words, people benefit from receiving the latest news in such way. For example, in the recent earthquake happening in China, the large damage was successfully avoided with few people losing lives as government predicted the disaster and instantly posted warning signals on the local webs few minutes before the earthquake. So, the benefits human enjoys from staying on social networking may include saving their lives.
However, it does not mean that staying on social media twenty-four hours a day and seven days a week has no drawbacks. It largely affects people’s daily work and life in a negative way. When having a serious business conference, checking social media from time to time shows unprofessionalism and may causes people to lose their jobs. Similar scenario can be found in families, where family members all staying in the virtual world all the time rather than communicate with each other in the real-world. This often serves as the stimuli for large quarrels or even divorces. Thus, associating with social media all the time causes inevitable negative consequences in people’s work and life.
In conclusion, connecting with social media twenty-four hours a day has both pros and cons. We need to critically think of such behaviour and find the balance of it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 173, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER
Message: Consider replacing "in a negative way" with adverb for "negative"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...fects people's daily work and life in a negative way. When having a serious business confere...
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, may, so, thus, for example, in conclusion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 10.5418719212 28% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 20.9802955665 52% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1463.0 1207.87684729 121% => OK
No of words: 279.0 242.827586207 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24372759857 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90269918672 2.71678728327 107% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 139.433497537 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598566308244 0.580463131201 103% => OK
syllable_count: 445.5 379.143842365 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.5011349921 50.4703680194 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.5333333333 104.977214359 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6 20.9669160288 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.13333333333 7.25397266985 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 2.91625615764 206% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0412596680667 0.242375264174 17% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0160957376296 0.0925447433944 17% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0233042193898 0.071462118173 33% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0230910839072 0.151781067708 15% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0162925630586 0.0609392437508 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
automated_readability_index: 12.6 12.6369458128 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 53.1260098522 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 11.5310837438 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.32886699507 109% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 55.0591133005 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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