The medical technology is responsible for increasing the average life expectancy. Do you think it is a curse or a blessing?
Recently, the life expectancy of people is getting increased due to the drastic development in medical science has sparked a heated debate among individuals. There is a school of thought that development in medical technology is greatest development, whereas there are those who maintain a contradict view. However, it does not seem unreasonable to suggest that advancement in medical field is cruse to mankind. In this essay, I will elaborate both positive and negative sides with clear examples and thus lead to a plausible conclusion.
To commence with, there are myriad of reasons why development in medical field is good for people are as follows. At the heart of this matter is that increase the life span of people because of advancement in medical field. Another major contributing factor of course, is that new invention in medical field had found solutions to many dreadful diseases such as cancer, HIV and many.
Nevertheless, there are pitfalls that negate with this argument and that can certainly overwhelm the potential influence of invention in medical field, still the most alarming one rooted to the fact that old people are living more and more so due to that there is an increase financial burden on families. Moreover, it causes increasing in population and create so many problems like poverty in people, the lack of basic facilities and many more problems.
To put it in a nutshell, I pen down saying that as per aforementioned arguments, negative sides of advancement in medical field far outweigh its merits and thus they are indeed too great to ignore.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...thus lead to a plausible conclusion. To commence with, there are myriad of re...
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...seases such as cancer, HIV and many. Nevertheless, there are pitfalls that ne...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, still, thus, whereas, of course, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 31.9359605911 125% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 5.75862068966 243% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1329.0 1207.87684729 110% => OK
No of words: 261.0 242.827586207 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09195402299 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82410047947 2.71678728327 104% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 139.433497537 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586206896552 0.580463131201 101% => OK
syllable_count: 421.2 379.143842365 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.5024630542 127% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.3244174404 50.4703680194 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.9 104.977214359 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1 20.9669160288 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.6 7.25397266985 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146433282013 0.242375264174 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0621730203753 0.0925447433944 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0411015411335 0.071462118173 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0844038964184 0.151781067708 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0418427909985 0.0609392437508 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 12.6369458128 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 53.1260098522 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.9458128079 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 11.5310837438 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.32886699507 111% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 55.0591133005 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.3980295567 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.