"Mistakes, obviously, show us what needs improvement. Without mistakes, how would we know what we had to work on?"
Are mistakes the portals of discovery or progress?
State your opinion and support it with reasons and/or examples from your own experience or observations.
Mistakes in life make us more responsible and mature. Mistakes tells us what needs to be improved and without mistakes we cannot know what we have to do.
This essay would further elaborate on the improvement of mistakes and what action we have to taken.
The first and foremost statement that substantiate my point of view is that we have to improve our mistakes. I am taking my own example, I made a mistake in one the report in my office, I learnt from that mistake is that i have to improve my mistake so that I cannot do these type of mistakes again in future. My opinion is that we can learn from our mistakes and can improve.
Another pivotal facet of the statement is that how would we know that what we had to work on without mistakes. I am not in support with this statement. We can do our work perfectly without any mistake. For instance, I am having dedicated work in my office so that is my duty to do that perfectly without any mistake.
To recapitulate from the statement, I would like to epitomize by saying mistakes can show us what we can do for not making mistake in future but without mistakes we can do our work in one go.
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| 2019-05-12 | SAURABH063 | 55 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 300, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
... cannot do these type of mistakes again in future. My opinion is that we can learn from o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.5418719212 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 6.10837438424 180% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 20.9802955665 214% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 940.0 1207.87684729 78% => OK
No of words: 216.0 242.827586207 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.35185185185 5.00649968141 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.491962388 2.71678728327 92% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 139.433497537 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.449074074074 0.580463131201 77% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 314.1 379.143842365 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 4.6157635468 195% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.5717720891 50.4703680194 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.4545454545 104.977214359 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6363636364 20.9669160288 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.90909090909 7.25397266985 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.310821403717 0.242375264174 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.147757073785 0.0925447433944 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10121222998 0.071462118173 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.202762538243 0.151781067708 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0527333179116 0.0609392437508 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 12.6369458128 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 53.1260098522 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.9458128079 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.95 11.5310837438 69% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.92 8.32886699507 83% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 55.0591133005 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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