In the modern world it is possible to shop, work and communicate with people via internet and live without any face-to-face contact with others. Is it a positive or negative development in your opinion? To what extent do you support this development?
The internet is being used worldwide in almost all the sectors. Umpteen tasks are easily be performed by individuals. It is very convenient to buy products, to do online work and to build relations with professionals; It has given enormous benefits to the society; therefore, it can be said that it is a beneficial development.
A person can buy purchase anything with the help of the internet. If one wishes to buy a laptop, it is very easy to demand for the product by sending emails. Thus, the precious time is being saved by them. Moreover, some of the employees are paying attention to their work online; they get assignments from their seniors on emails and reply them on the same email track in a short span of time. It has increased productivity and overall development of organizations; therefore, it can be said that the internet has given tremendous advantages to the society, and it is a positive development.
Furthermore, the internet also has become a source of communication among people. A one can easily communicate with another; people use it in order to build relations worldwide; it helps them in the growth of their future. For instance, umpteen companies conduct online meetings with their clients in order to boost market share. As a result, it has been revealed that MNCs in the countries of USA, Canada, America are doing business worldwide.
From the above-said points, it can be conceded that internet has become a preponderant part of everyone’s life in terms of buying, working and communication; hence, it is considered as a positive development.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 217, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
... time is being saved by them. Moreover, some of the employees are paying attention to their...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, for instance, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 10.5418719212 161% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 20.9802955665 119% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 31.9359605911 122% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1329.0 1207.87684729 110% => OK
No of words: 265.0 242.827586207 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01509433962 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05893226008 2.71678728327 113% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 139.433497537 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.547169811321 0.580463131201 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 422.1 379.143842365 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 4.6157635468 238% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 1.56157635468 320% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.6175185722 50.4703680194 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.230769231 104.977214359 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3846153846 20.9669160288 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.61538461538 7.25397266985 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133625822402 0.242375264174 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0465853132425 0.0925447433944 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0353376341643 0.071462118173 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0802205459983 0.151781067708 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0189534214908 0.0609392437508 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 12.6369458128 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.1260098522 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 11.5310837438 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.32886699507 106% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 55.0591133005 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.94827586207 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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