More and more students are studying at universities abroad, either because it is cheaper, or because they feel they can receive a better education, or because it will provide them with greater professional opportunities. Which one do you think is the most

Nowadays most of the students are studing at abroad universities, because it cost less or because for the better education and also for the better professional opportunities. It has lots of advantage but it is also not possible without any disadvantage.

Studying abroad is a good option for international students. There are number of qualitative university which provides a quality education to students. Countries like America, Australia, japan and many other European countries provide qualitative education to the students in a very cheap cost. Similarly it also provides better future professional opportunities. which will lead to a better and successful life. Also students will be far from their family and they will get opportunity to get independent. Living along eventually helps to develop self-confident and also helps them to develop skills.

However, as I already mentioned studying abroad is also not possible without any drawbacks because living alone may lead to difficulties. People may get language issues like people from Nepal, india , china they don’t have perfect ascent on speaking international language. Also they may get difficulties on paying university fees because they don’t have enough time to work and earn at the same time. They may set several difficulties on managing their time and they may get late for their college or work and also they may get drawbacks on managing their income.

To conclude, I believe that studing abroad is a good option but before coming to aborad parents should give advice to their children on how to manage time and how to handle all works. If student will be able to handle all this things then they may have better future in abroad.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, similarly, so, then

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 6.10837438424 196% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 8.36945812808 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1446.0 1207.87684729 120% => OK
No of words: 276.0 242.827586207 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23913043478 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89093271319 2.71678728327 106% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 139.433497537 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.518115942029 0.580463131201 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 464.4 379.143842365 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.1290651486 50.4703680194 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.4 104.977214359 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4 20.9669160288 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.2 7.25397266985 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.33497536946 131% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 6.9802955665 172% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261077075285 0.242375264174 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0937432667497 0.0925447433944 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0711382743219 0.071462118173 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163395783607 0.151781067708 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0520871328485 0.0609392437508 85% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 12.6369458128 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 53.1260098522 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 11.5310837438 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.32886699507 95% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 55.0591133005 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 61.0 Out of 90
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