In this modern time computer has made everything possible and easier but some Skeptics and people are opposing with this statement. but in my view i believe technology has made human life much easier. To support my point of view here i will mentioned how computer has made human life easier.
In the past, human life was much difficult but since computer appeared on the scene it has made life easier and happier. People can easily do all the work with the help of computer like they can complete their office work by sitting in home. Job interviews, college projects can be held easily in computer. People can also buy products through online shopping. Similarly, they can also get new ideas about different place to travel. People can reach everywhere with the help of computer. For instance, scientist has invented space robots which provides all the information about what is happening in space and that robot is also a computer. Computer has made study much cheaper as we can see most of the students do online sudy rather than going to college or university.
However, in the past people have to write letter to each other to have conversation but nowadays it is much easier to have conversation with the people who live far from us. Likewise, computer technology helps on inventing any other device. For example in 1957 the scientist name john mical invented invented device name celphone with the help of computer.
To conclude, i believe computer has eventually made human life much easier and happier .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, likewise, similarly, so, for example, for instance, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.5418719212 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1265.0 1207.87684729 105% => OK
No of words: 258.0 242.827586207 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90310077519 5.00649968141 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45934126262 2.71678728327 91% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 139.433497537 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546511627907 0.580463131201 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 407.7 379.143842365 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.3945050798 50.4703680194 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.3333333333 104.977214359 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2 20.9669160288 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.73333333333 7.25397266985 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.33497536946 169% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 6.9802955665 158% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135786003982 0.242375264174 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0488175265486 0.0925447433944 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0436846763263 0.071462118173 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0860035555568 0.151781067708 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0127049308487 0.0609392437508 21% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 12.6369458128 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 53.1260098522 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 11.5310837438 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.32886699507 92% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 55.0591133005 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.94827586207 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 62.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 56.5 Out of 90
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