More and more wild animals are on the verge of extinction and others are on the endangered list. What are the reasons for this? What can be done to solve this problem?
The importance of wild life on the verge of extinction, which was debatable has now become more controversial. The substantial influence of extinction of wild life have sparked controversy over the potential impact of this trend on animal species and especially on endangered species. It can be said that animal population is at risk, if proper steps are not considered to safeguard them. This essay will elaborate reasons for wild animal extinction and solutions to overcome difficulties and thus will lead to a logical conclusion.
At the outset, there are numerous reasons what wild life is in danger, but one of the most conspicuous one stems from the fact that, growing human population. Example for instance, deforestation, wildlife poaching, over consumption of meaty products in diet. Moreover, hunting extinct species such as, elephants for ivory, white tigers and sharks. Furthermore, changes in environmental due to human behaviour is the main reason that wildlife is in danger.
Another reason why wildlife conservation should be analysed to solve the issue of animal exploitation is by preserving forest and thus, will reduce the stain of wildlife being in danger. Example for instance, a vegetarian diet, adopting more pets, make stricter laws to safeguard endangered species, wildlife funding, preserving extinction species at zoological gardens. Based on that it, can be agreed that problems with wildlife extinction can be controlled if there was enough collaboration.
In conclusion, approaches to deal with wildlife extinction are innumerable, but the most effective one is that reducing deforestation, and introducing laws to protect wildlife species can solve the issue of animal life on the verge of extinction and protect endangered species.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, thus, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.5418719212 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 20.9802955665 52% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 31.9359605911 122% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 5.75862068966 313% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1502.0 1207.87684729 124% => OK
No of words: 272.0 242.827586207 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.52205882353 5.00649968141 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06897882941 2.71678728327 113% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 139.433497537 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551470588235 0.580463131201 95% => OK
syllable_count: 468.9 379.143842365 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.5186050536 50.4703680194 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.166666667 104.977214359 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6666666667 20.9669160288 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.25397266985 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.341562280458 0.242375264174 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111093702415 0.0925447433944 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0490340726032 0.071462118173 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192567893153 0.151781067708 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0748449630834 0.0609392437508 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 12.6369458128 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 53.1260098522 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.9458128079 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.03 11.5310837438 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.32886699507 110% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 55.0591133005 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.5123152709 152% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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