Most high level job are done done by men. Should government encourage that certain percentage of this job be reserved for women. What is your opinion?
The imoportant effect of most high level jobs are done by man so government should encourage some certain percentage of job should be reserved for women which was always debatable has now become more controversal. The substantial influence of Some few job should be reserved for women has sparked the controversy over the potential impact of this trend on women have full rights to do some job in compare to men in recent year. In my opinion, women are more powerful and intelligent if they got chance to do some certain job.
At the outset, there are numerous reason why women needs to get some reserved job but the most conspicious one steam's from the fact that governments should open some job for women so they can grow their personal and professional lifestyel in the society. As an illustration, for example a current study shows in America a women name Tina Roy was the prime minister of 2015. In addition, women are more brilliant and knowledgeable person who can bring many changes good technology in the society. Thus, women should get chance to do job in government sector so that they can be succesful and independent in the society.
Another key of justification for upholding the notion is that women can be the strongest leader of the country if they can get a good job. For instance, in our society female are the most intelligent and claim person who can do and bring the new changes the good things in the home, society and whole in the country as well as over the world.
From what has been discussed above it can be concluded that the impact of this topic is prominent and women are very powerful and strong person so they should get chance for job.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 323, Rule ID: WOMAN_WOMEN[1]
Message: 'woman' is the singular form of 'women'. Consider using 'woman'?
Suggestion: woman
...mple a current study shows in America a women name Tina Roy was the prime minister of...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, thus, well, for example, for instance, in addition, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.5418719212 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 6.10837438424 213% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1382.0 1207.87684729 114% => OK
No of words: 297.0 242.827586207 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6531986532 5.00649968141 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54816985918 2.71678728327 94% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 139.433497537 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.494949494949 0.580463131201 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 432.9 379.143842365 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 4.6157635468 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.5024630542 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.481778891 50.4703680194 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.2 104.977214359 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.7 20.9669160288 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.25397266985 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.430816491485 0.242375264174 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.179432598054 0.0925447433944 194% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.13475070265 0.071462118173 189% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.258659046584 0.151781067708 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.149741765148 0.0609392437508 246% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 12.6369458128 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 53.1260098522 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.9458128079 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.28 11.5310837438 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 8.32886699507 92% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 55.0591133005 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.94827586207 141% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.3980295567 131% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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