Movie stars and celebreties should be good role models and use their fame to promote worthy causes. To what extent do you agree this with the statement. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
Cinema has become one of the well-known and grown industry for almost hundred years from now. We must accept the concept that current generation people are attracted towards many entertaining hobbies and Cinema is one such hobby where majority of people prefer. There are different sorts of people, those who love cinemas or movies and those who admires the actors of Movies. Hence the heroes or heroines are considered as role models to their followers. This essay is going to address the pros and cons about celebrities’ as role models.
Movie stars and celebrities, are those who are being followed insanely by many of the fans. Once a fan starts to follow movie stars or celebrities, he or she starts to explore more about their personal behaviors, habbits, nature of living and then try to adopt the same in their life. For example, when a moviestar or a celebrity starts donating to a charity or promoting themself to support a noble cause, obviously, their followers will try to repeat the same in their lifestyles too.
The fame that a movie star or a celebrity receives help them to earn more, not only by acting in films also by acting in advertisements and event promotions. Few heroes get fame by negative promotions like performing in a liquor advertisements or adult prone movies. Note, the fact about triggering the audience in terms of things like liquor or porn will get immediate attention and it spreads virally.
Not all the celebrities or movie stars are bad, we must also accept their attitude and behavior on screen will create a trend and mindset to their followers as well as the general audience. In my opinion, movie star regardless of their personality should always use their fame only to promote worthy and noble causes.
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Suggestion: Hence,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, so, then, well, for example, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 8.36945812808 251% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1462.0 1207.87684729 121% => OK
No of words: 299.0 242.827586207 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88963210702 5.00649968141 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66613716439 2.71678728327 98% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 139.433497537 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57525083612 0.580463131201 99% => OK
syllable_count: 469.8 379.143842365 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.5541280997 50.4703680194 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.461538462 104.977214359 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.9669160288 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.46153846154 7.25397266985 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213668793084 0.242375264174 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0758057913255 0.0925447433944 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0855987104017 0.071462118173 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126364298745 0.151781067708 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0799482027938 0.0609392437508 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 12.6369458128 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 53.1260098522 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 11.5310837438 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.32886699507 104% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 55.0591133005 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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