Nowadays, the bickering has common trend amongst youngsters and married people. This has led to polygamy and high divorce rates. Justify your answer with your positive or negative views.
Polygamy refers to indulge in multiple marriages by a man or woman was always a controversial topic. Many people state that this practice has become very popular which has led to increase in divorce rates. I completely agree with the statement that bickering has become common trend and it has negative effects on present society. This essay would further elaborate the how polygamy leading to high divorce rates with justifying reasons and thus lead to a appropriate conclusion.
To start with, I firmly believe that polygamy is not best approach to living a happy life because it gives birth to so many problems and creates disharmony in one's life. To include my point of view, firstly, it causes jealousy among husbands or wives which result in domestic abuse, conflicts, mismatch of thoughts between them affect relationship. Secondly, it gives a hike to financial problems because of the demands of other partners. Moreover, polygamist children face emotion problems and they deprived of the love and affection from their parents.
Polygamy is injurious to mental health of women in such relationships, fostering negative emotions and ultimately effecting the health life and finally leading to high divorce rate from health personal life. In recent study conducted by University of California, found that 24.7 percent of men and 55.5 percent of women complained that emotional abuse is the main reason for getting divorce. And another common reason is that issue of intimacy between couples and when couples going to marriage have goals, aspirations and certain things that can contribute to the relationship. Dramatic changes in any such things can lead to a high divorce rate.
According to the arguments aforementioned, one can reach out to conclusion that there are so many problems associated with the practice of polygamy. In a nutshell, it can be concluded that several reasons are contributed to high increase in divorce rates and it has negative impact on both male and female.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 8.36945812808 179% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 5.94088669951 202% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 23.0 20.9802955665 110% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 31.9359605911 160% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1682.0 1207.87684729 139% => OK
No of words: 322.0 242.827586207 133% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22360248447 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 3.92707691288 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76151052094 2.71678728327 102% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 139.433497537 136% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586956521739 0.580463131201 101% => OK
syllable_count: 535.5 379.143842365 141% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.2667128441 50.4703680194 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.142857143 104.977214359 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.9669160288 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.07142857143 7.25397266985 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 2.75862068966 326% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179742827397 0.242375264174 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0593001040535 0.0925447433944 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0582300735997 0.071462118173 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109375658074 0.151781067708 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0890005772893 0.0609392437508 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 12.6369458128 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 53.1260098522 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.9458128079 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 11.5310837438 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 8.32886699507 112% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 55.0591133005 169% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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