Nowadays, it is increasingly more difficult to maintain the right balance between work and other aspects of one’s life, such as leisure time with family members. How important do you think is this balance? Why do people find it hard to achieve?
In this day and age, work-life balance has become a debatable issue among people from all walks of life all around the world. Although managing a job and family is regarded as both positive and constructive by many people, there are some individuals who hold an opposite view. I am inclined to strongly believe that work-life balance is quite beneficial for nations since it promotes the growth of society.
To begin with, there are a number of reasons why I support work-life balance. First and foremost overall happiness of the individual. Secondly, well being of the community. In my personal opinion when I followed work-life balance, I became more healthy. Consequently, it is quite sure that work-life balance is good.
However, there is no doubt that handling job and family can provide individuals with various negative outcomes such as lack of career growth. By way of example, recent academic research conducted by the Oxford University researchers has found that people who concentrate on work-life balance, have a less ambitious life. Thus it is quite obvious that balancing a job and life can be negative too.
To put it in a nutshell, while there are some persuasive arguments on both sides, my arguments confirm that work-life balance is good. Not only due to happiness but also due to the well being of the individual.
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Suggestion: opinion
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Suggestion: Thus,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, thus, well, while, no doubt, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 31.9359605911 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1121.0 1207.87684729 93% => OK
No of words: 223.0 242.827586207 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0269058296 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75277158745 2.71678728327 101% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 139.433497537 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605381165919 0.580463131201 104% => OK
syllable_count: 366.3 379.143842365 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.4647494118 50.4703680194 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.2307692308 104.977214359 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1538461538 20.9669160288 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.07692307692 7.25397266985 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203813721404 0.242375264174 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0717320220172 0.0925447433944 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0508845303306 0.071462118173 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123577157334 0.151781067708 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0340407502415 0.0609392437508 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 12.6369458128 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 53.1260098522 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 11.5310837438 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.32886699507 100% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 55.0591133005 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 64.5 Out of 90
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