Nowadays, it is increasingly more difficult to maintain the right balance
between work and other aspects of one’s life, such as leisure time with family
members. How important do you think is this balance? Why do people find it
hard to achieve?
In this modern world, there is an ongoing deliberation among people, on maintaining right balance between work and family life. Some people argue that it is not important in keeping balance in both family and work life, on my point of view I strongly disagree with that arguement. In this essay, I shall discuss on the importance and the difficulties in balancing life both at office and home.
Firstly, employees have to commit on achieving their career goals, because it is the main source of a person's income. For example, if a person is dedicated on their job there is agreat possibility of getting promotion at their work place together with financial rewards. Moreover, people have to keep some time to spend with their family members because mental fitness would create a pleasant mind in working at an organization.
On the other hand, there are few difficulties in achieving the correct balance such as lack of staff at office and turbulent market environment. For instance, if there is less peole in office the existing staff has to cover up the work irrespective of the time available in normal office hours. Apart from that, due to uncertainity prevailing in current market context there are difficulties in forecasting things for a long time period. Therefore, the management bears the responsibility of segregating work among people in an unbiased mehods in order to mitigate the adverse impacts on their employees.
In conclusion, it is recommended people to understand the role they have to play both in office and home and schedule their life according to the time available, minimizing conflicts with their subordinates and loved ones as well. Finally, organizations can organize trips to maintain a healthy relationships among their staff and their families to make them feel of their importance.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 103, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...als, because it is the main source of a persons income. For example, if a person is ded...
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Line 7, column 296, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'relationship'?
Suggestion: relationship
...an organize trips to maintain a healthy relationships among their staff and their families to...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, apart from, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 20.9802955665 110% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 31.9359605911 172% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 5.75862068966 208% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1527.0 1207.87684729 126% => OK
No of words: 298.0 242.827586207 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12416107383 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88184707534 2.71678728327 106% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 139.433497537 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563758389262 0.580463131201 97% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 379.143842365 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.7009242979 50.4703680194 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 127.25 104.977214359 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8333333333 20.9669160288 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.25 7.25397266985 169% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18273028831 0.242375264174 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0742778131158 0.0925447433944 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0471627828655 0.071462118173 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114665557569 0.151781067708 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0593464738735 0.0609392437508 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 12.6369458128 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 53.1260098522 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 11.5310837438 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.32886699507 108% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 55.0591133005 142% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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