Nowadays, the mass media including TV, radio and newspaper have become the
essential part of our lives. What is your opinion?
“People react according to the perspective they hold in any situation" is a well-known
and accepted fact around the world. Of course, perspective is highly influenced by
the information people receive through communication channels like TV, radio, and
newspapers. Hence, as expected, to control the burgeoning of people's thoughts,
many countries have regulated the freedom of media.
Firstly, nowadays, media plays a vital role in forming our perspectives towards our
country's current politics, sports, and other issues as it is an important part of our
everyday life. Almost all of us use some sort of media to get updated about the
world. In fact, for many of us, a day starts with a newspaper. Since media persons are
highly revered, accordingly, we truly trust the information we receive from media.
For example: during the World War II, Hitler used the German media to spread false
news about atrocities over German people living in other European countries to
mentally prepare everyone in Germany to gear up for war.
Secondly, media also shapes our minds to understand each other's cultural values and
perspectives. Media brings us views of different people over same issues and based on
the circumstances we react, oppose and even embrace these different views. Also,
media brings all of us to a single platform where we learn about multi-cultures.
So, the vital impact of media cannot be disregarded. For example: in multi-cultural cities
like Toronto, media plays a prominent role in unifying multinationals and pumps in
nationality.
In conclusion, I believe media is having a tremendous impact on people's mind and
perspectives. Hence, it is equally important to ensure the freedom of media and
publication of unbiased news.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, well, for example, in conclusion, in fact, of course, sort of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 6.10837438424 16% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 5.94088669951 17% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 31.9359605911 147% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1513.0 1207.87684729 125% => OK
No of words: 279.0 242.827586207 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.4229390681 5.00649968141 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02049541576 2.71678728327 111% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 139.433497537 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605734767025 0.580463131201 104% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 379.143842365 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.6101134522 50.4703680194 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.866666667 104.977214359 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6 20.9669160288 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.6 7.25397266985 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 22.0 4.12807881773 533% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156249083755 0.242375264174 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0539692307776 0.0925447433944 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0407467346609 0.071462118173 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0456855239921 0.151781067708 30% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0442409635519 0.0609392437508 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 12.6369458128 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 53.1260098522 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 11.5310837438 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.32886699507 103% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 55.0591133005 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.