Nowadays, people spend too much time at work to the extent that they hardly have any time for their personal life. Discuss work-life balance.
The effect of people spending too much time at work, which was always debatable has now become more controversial. The substantial influence of employees working long hours has sparked the controversy over the potential impact of this trend on their personal life. It can be said that people should work long hours, however, some people claim that they should have time for personal lives. This essay will elaborate what makes people work longer and the positive effects of creating a work-life balance and this will lead to a logical conclusion.
At the outset, there are a number of reasons why people spend too much time at work, but the most preponderant one lies in the fact that employees have job insecurities. For example, studies indicate that people who spend less time at work are often unlikely to get promoted. Furthermore, with robots and artificial intelligence ready to take over the human workforce, it has added an enormous amount of pressure on the employees to perform at optimum levels to and to stay ahead in the race.
Nevertheless, some people adopt an opposing view and tend to believe that people should allocate time for their personal lives. This is primarily because, by doing so, it helps in improving an employee’s health. For instance, productivity and lower absenteeism were recorded after Apple tailored their work schedule to facilitate an employee’s stress at work and help spend time with their family. Furthermore, a good work-life balance can enable employees to feel more in control of their working life and lead to increased productivity, a happier married life, and improvements in employee’s health.
From what has been discussed above, one can conclude that working extra hours is prominent to secure their position at the company, although creating a work-life balance should not be overlooked.
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but, furthermore, however, if, look, nevertheless, so, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 31.9359605911 125% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1565.0 1207.87684729 130% => OK
No of words: 300.0 242.827586207 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21666666667 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86218836246 2.71678728327 105% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 139.433497537 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56 0.580463131201 96% => OK
syllable_count: 478.8 379.143842365 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.5024630542 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 40.7971778708 50.4703680194 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.416666667 104.977214359 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.9669160288 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 7.25397266985 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.486360763186 0.242375264174 201% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.188373931046 0.0925447433944 204% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0892889991133 0.071462118173 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.299432610531 0.151781067708 197% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0738186270646 0.0609392437508 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 12.6369458128 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 53.1260098522 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.9458128079 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 11.5310837438 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.32886699507 109% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 55.0591133005 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.3980295567 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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