The number of elderly people in the world is increasing. What do you think are the positive and negative effects of this trend?

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The number of elderly people in the world is increasing. What do you think are the positive and negative effects of this trend?

In recent research, it is discovered that old age people life is increasing. It has both positive and negative consequences on human life. Though in my perception it would have more disadvantages and I will analyze that throughout this essay.

Though, it seems good thing that people age is increasing as they must be living healthy life and Government must have provided them adequate medical facilities. It is certainly a fact that everyone wants to live long and health life however, it is undeniable that it can have repercussions on our society. To illustrate, Indian Government has increased the retirement age to 60 which will cause reduction in job opportunities for youth and that will result unemployment. Moreover, sooner or later if this trend continues, it will drastically increase the population and that will result food and medical shortfall.

However, we must admit that experience people presence always plays a significant role to in any area to achieve desired targets. For an instance, most of the government and public sectors consider to make a tag team of young and old people to run their organization in an appropriate way because they know that young blood creative ideas and old people experience will make a great merger and eventually, will help to grow the organization.

In conclusion, we accept the fact of people age is increasing but on the other hand Government should make proper arrangements that it will not cause shortage of daily needs product. Furthermore, sufficient job opportunities for young generation.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider replacing "in an appropriate way" with adverb for "appropriate"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...nd old people to run their organization in an appropriate way because they know that young blood crea...
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Line 7, column 169, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'needs'' or 'need's'?
Suggestion: needs'; need's
...hat it will not cause shortage of daily needs product. Furthermore, sufficient job op...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, in conclusion, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 6.10837438424 229% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 13.0 8.36945812808 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 5.94088669951 185% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 20.9802955665 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 31.9359605911 69% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 5.75862068966 278% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1308.0 1207.87684729 108% => OK
No of words: 252.0 242.827586207 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19047619048 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02952216284 2.71678728327 112% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 139.433497537 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59126984127 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 406.8 379.143842365 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 4.6157635468 173% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.2864850797 50.4703680194 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.909090909 104.977214359 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9090909091 20.9669160288 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.25397266985 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0972859610338 0.242375264174 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0433331912956 0.0925447433944 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0398321912684 0.071462118173 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.066697460913 0.151781067708 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0474086766331 0.0609392437508 78% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 12.6369458128 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.1260098522 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 11.5310837438 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.32886699507 106% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 55.0591133005 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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