Needless to say that modern development in medical care has increased and has brought wonders to the world. Compared to older days, sophisticated medical equipments have increased the expectancy of life and has brought end to deadly diseases like pneumonia,flu, tuberculosis and so on. As we know" Health is Wealth" these developments in medical sector have brought great benefits to the world.
To keep one chin's up, medical equipments like ECG, X-RAY, CT SCAN helps us to find the reasons for diseases accurately. Nowadays, we have diet chart and advises from nutritionist to keep our body fit and healthy as "Prevention is better than cure". The technology improvement like fitbit helps us to check our heart beat rate, calories intake and so on. Even though, some treatments and surgeries for diseases like heart attack , cancer, dialysis and so on costs an arm and a leg these modern development has brought a cure to diseases , thus increasing the life span of a man.
On the other hand, some people consider longevity of life as a burden because they need to take care of elders in home. But most of the parents, are workaholic and they have to bring home the bacon. So, the grandparents always take care of the children as they arrive from school and tuition. They provide safety for the house and children.
As we can see, longevity of life and elders in our home is always been a blessing than a burden. I conclude that technology development in medical sector has brought longevity of life which is a blessing for us.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, thus, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.5418719212 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 8.36945812808 167% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1293.0 1207.87684729 107% => OK
No of words: 263.0 242.827586207 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91634980989 5.00649968141 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84352580742 2.71678728327 105% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 139.433497537 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.536121673004 0.580463131201 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 401.4 379.143842365 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.0567382326 50.4703680194 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.4615384615 104.977214359 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2307692308 20.9669160288 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.76923076923 7.25397266985 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 6.9802955665 158% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152678477654 0.242375264174 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0560996311879 0.0925447433944 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0438689792561 0.071462118173 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0957180980692 0.151781067708 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0319623932859 0.0609392437508 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 12.6369458128 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 53.1260098522 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 11.5310837438 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.32886699507 92% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 55.0591133005 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 82.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 74.5 Out of 90
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