The world has been shortened to our hands when mobiles become popular. As a result, online shopping had become important part of human life.
Because of many advantages, people has chosen online application while they purchase anything rather than going to a local shop. Main advantages of online shopping is that we can compare, review, criticize our products before buy. Also it become economical to buy products from online shopping because of competition.'
There is a debate said that online shopping causes local shops to decelerate their business. But this not true and local business can earn much profit with their unique products. They should work together as clusters to become a shopping or tourist spot. Like flee markets in Asia, this will give an added advantage for customer to pick diverse items.
In conclusion, we could say there are still abundant chances for local markets over online shopping even though fierce competitions are there.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 232, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...iew, criticize our products before buy. Also it become economical to buy products fr...
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Line 3, column 240, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'becomes'?
Suggestion: becomes
...ticize our products before buy. Also it become economical to buy products from online ...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, still, while, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 10.5418719212 47% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 8.36945812808 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 20.9802955665 62% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 31.9359605911 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 811.0 1207.87684729 67% => OK
No of words: 155.0 242.827586207 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23225806452 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52844152537 3.92707691288 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46037483502 2.71678728327 91% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 139.433497537 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.716129032258 0.580463131201 123% => OK
syllable_count: 255.6 379.143842365 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 20.5024630542 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.8525709713 50.4703680194 45% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 81.1 104.977214359 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5 20.9669160288 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.9 7.25397266985 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278334114305 0.242375264174 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11012704715 0.0925447433944 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.057985921817 0.071462118173 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154897248749 0.151781067708 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0562776746297 0.0609392437508 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 12.6369458128 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 53.1260098522 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.9458128079 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 11.5310837438 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.32886699507 99% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 55.0591133005 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.3980295567 77% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 200 words wanted.
Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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