Parents are responsible for the behavior of the children. To what extent do you agree or disagree.
Recently, the phenomenon of parents' responsibility toward their children's behaviour and its corresponding impact has sparked a heated debate. Although contested by many that having responsible parents is highly beneficial, such issue is regarded thoroughly both constructive and positive by a substantial number of individuals. I am inclined to believe that well-behaved children depend on so many factors rather than parents and I will analyze that throughout this essay.
From the educational standpoint, deprivation of proper school can provide a society with some noticeable effects which are rooted in the fact that irresponsibility as well as aggressiveness, are inextricably bound up. According to my personal experience, when I was a university student, I performed an academic examination which discovered poor education system has an important influence on child's behaviour despite their responsible parents. Thus, the beneficial consequences of good education and responsible parents apparently can be seen.
Within the realm of nurturing, break-down families might increase the consequences of juvenile delinquencies. Moreover, the fundamental aspects of committing a crime related to this reality that the demerits of poor upbringing pertain to parent's irresponsibility. As a tangible example, a scientific research is undertaken by a prestigious university has asserted that the downsides of trouble childhood are correlated negatively with family. Hence, it is correct to presume the preconceived the notion of parents role on their child.
To conclude, while there are several arguments on both sides, I profoundly believe that the benefits of responsible parents far outweigh its drawbacks. Not only do the advantages of great upbringing prove the significance of parent's role, but also pinpoint education implication.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 239, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'parent'.
Suggestion: parent
... demerits of poor upbringing pertain to parents irresponsibility. As a tangible example...
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Line 5, column 288, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'scientific research'.
Suggestion: scientific research
...rresponsibility. As a tangible example, a scientific research is undertaken by a prestigious universi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, hence, if, moreover, so, thus, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1578.0 1207.87684729 131% => OK
No of words: 267.0 242.827586207 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.91011235955 5.00649968141 118% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.43759021259 2.71678728327 127% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 139.433497537 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.651685393258 0.580463131201 112% => OK
syllable_count: 500.4 379.143842365 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.57093596059 121% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.4892054234 50.4703680194 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.5 104.977214359 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.25 20.9669160288 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.41666666667 7.25397266985 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164212949574 0.242375264174 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0582528046333 0.0925447433944 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0430972558629 0.071462118173 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0962165545878 0.151781067708 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0468226462949 0.0609392437508 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 12.6369458128 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 23.77 53.1260098522 45% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.54236453202 199% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 10.9458128079 141% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.29 11.5310837438 150% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.64 8.32886699507 128% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 55.0591133005 182% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 9.94827586207 161% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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