Parents should be held legally responsible for children’s acts. What is your opinion?
Recently, the phenomenon of involvement of children in crimes or wrong acts and its corresponding impact has sparked a heated debate. Although contested by many that children should remain under the supervision of their parents and also parents should be held legally responsible for their behavior is highly important, such issue is regarded thoroughly both positive and constructive by a substantial number of individuals. I reckon that children's act should be under the continuous watch by their parents, can be a plus and I will analyze this throughout this essay.
From a social standpoint, when parents are legally responsible for children's act can provide the society with the noticeable effects with the rooted facts that the merits of conscious efforts, as well as guiding them all the time are inextricably bound up. According to my own experience, when I was an university student, I performed a research that discover that when parents watch their kids activity sincerely and learn them about the difference between good and bad, such efforts contribute a lot to the society. Thus, beneficial ramifications of this apparently can be seen.
On the flip side, it has been seen that parents who don't care about their children activity encourages them to commit more crime due to lack of any fear. Hence, considering parents as an equal contributor in children's wrong doing bring fears in them too. For example, a kid should have this fear that how parents are going to react after knowing any misbehave.
To conclude, while there are compelling arguments on both the sides, I profoundly believe that the merits of keeping an eye on children acts to minimize the crime rate and also considering parents equally responsible for their actions outweigh its demerits. Thus, positive aspects of this should be considered.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, hence, if, so, thus, well, while, for example, i reckon, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 5.94088669951 202% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 32.0 20.9802955665 153% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 31.9359605911 119% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1537.0 1207.87684729 127% => OK
No of words: 297.0 242.827586207 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17508417508 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83117136447 2.71678728327 104% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 139.433497537 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579124579125 0.580463131201 100% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 379.143842365 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.71428571429 292% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.5024630542 132% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 82.1575788871 50.4703680194 163% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.727272727 104.977214359 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0 20.9669160288 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.18181818182 7.25397266985 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.287496564525 0.242375264174 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109677559031 0.0925447433944 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0718617837762 0.071462118173 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17958449768 0.151781067708 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0625914895269 0.0609392437508 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 12.6369458128 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 53.1260098522 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.9458128079 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 11.5310837438 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.32886699507 109% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 55.0591133005 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.94827586207 146% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.3980295567 123% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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