We can say that a child born with intelligence but his or her brain is as clean as a blank paper, so his or her parents play a very important role in his or her mental and physical development. Children do not know what is wrong and what is right until and unless someone tells them. In my opinion, parents are legally responsible to some extent for their children's behavior. In the following paragraphs, I will discuss this in more detail.
First of all, as everyone knows children learn very quickly from the events happening around them. If their parents are not following law and order then they start believing that it does not matter if we follow the rule and regulation of the nation and society or not. They will start involving in illegal activities because they do not have fear from the police. If the surroundings of children are not good they will not learn good things, so whatever environment parents provide to their kids that will impact their behavior.
In addition to this, parents are the first teacher of a child so the child follows them by thinking that whatever they are doing is correct. It does not matter to him or her whether that activity is legal or not. For example, if a minor is driving a car without license his or her parents must stop him or her because that is harmful to other persons walking or driving on the road.
To conclude, I strongly agree that parents should be held legally responsible for their children's activities because parents have a high influence on children's behavior.
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- In underdeveloped countries, tourism has disadvantages and can be said the opposite as well. Discuss your opinions and give examples. 72
- Do you think that the place where the person grew has an influence in his accomplishment? Explain with example. 55
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, then, for example, in addition, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 8.36945812808 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 20.9802955665 195% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 31.9359605911 75% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1264.0 1207.87684729 105% => OK
No of words: 271.0 242.827586207 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66420664207 5.00649968141 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48527204071 2.71678728327 91% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 139.433497537 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.516605166052 0.580463131201 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 378.9 379.143842365 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.57093596059 89% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.7292014054 50.4703680194 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.333333333 104.977214359 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5833333333 20.9669160288 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.58333333333 7.25397266985 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264500710899 0.242375264174 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100502549519 0.0925447433944 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.118628029911 0.071462118173 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187996428269 0.151781067708 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.116011469774 0.0609392437508 190% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 12.6369458128 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 53.1260098522 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.9458128079 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 11.5310837438 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 8.32886699507 91% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 55.0591133005 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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