ln the past 100 years the technological advancement has increased into the maximum level to make humans life more convenient and productive.In my opinion most indispensable invention was computers which aid in our daily life as it used in all the sectors.I will describe its immense contribution in human life in the following paraghraphs.
Firstly, computer has multi-tasking abilities as it can process and executes multiple tasks at a fraction of seconds,human just have to input data and it process it and gives us accurate results. Computer is used in all the sectors for example in medical sector, a computer is used in a wide range for research, storing data, inventing new drugs, medication, x-ray's.Computer saves data about the patient in computer and helps nurses and doctor to keep their records and have access whenever is needed.
Secondly, aeroplane mechanics are studied and research by computer, it helps the pilot to navigate to the destination moreover, an electronic device made them aware about weather conditions.computer is used to stored large number of data because of that papers are saves and deforestation has reduce.Internet has make our world a global village from that Student has benefited by a computer as they can connect to the teachers by online and study.
In conclusion, a computer is a superior invention which used in all the areas and without computers our life will be rose without petal.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 20.9802955665 67% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 31.9359605911 91% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1082.0 1207.87684729 90% => OK
No of words: 205.0 242.827586207 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27804878049 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.92707691288 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.44455186304 2.71678728327 127% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 139.433497537 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.629268292683 0.580463131201 108% => OK
syllable_count: 353.7 379.143842365 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.325123152709 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 12.6551724138 32% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 51.0 20.5024630542 249% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 129.607821909 50.4703680194 257% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 270.5 104.977214359 258% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 51.25 20.9669160288 244% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 23.5 7.25397266985 324% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.33497536946 187% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0914407313691 0.242375264174 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0547486227292 0.0925447433944 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0482335385198 0.071462118173 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0547486227292 0.151781067708 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0482335385198 0.0609392437508 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 29.1 12.6369458128 230% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 11.25 53.1260098522 21% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.54236453202 199% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 24.4 10.9458128079 223% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.23 11.5310837438 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.33 8.32886699507 136% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 55.0591133005 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 30.5 9.94827586207 307% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 22.4 10.3980295567 215% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 55.0 Out of 90
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