ln the past 100 years the technological advancement has increased into the maximum level to make humans life more convenient and productive.In my opinion most indispensable invention was computers which aid in our daily life as it used in all the sectors.I will describe its immense contribution in human life in the following paraghraphs.
Firstly, computer has multi-tasking abilities as it can process and executes multiple tasks at a fraction of seconds,human just have to input data and it process it and gives us accurate results. Computer is used in all the sectors for example in medical sector, a computer is used in a wide range for research, storing data, inventing new drugs, medication, x-ray's.Computer saves data about the patient in computer and helps nurses and doctor to keep their records and have access whenever is needed.
Secondly, aeroplane mechanics are studied and research by computer, it helps the pilot to navigate to the destination moreover, an electronic device made them aware about weather conditions.computer is used to stored large number of data because of that papers are saves and deforestation has reduce.Internet has make our world a global village from that Student has benefited by a computer as they can connect to the teachers by online and study.
In conclusion, a computer is a superior invention which used in all the areas and without computers our life will be rose without petal.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1202.0 1207.87684729 100% => OK
No of words: 233.0 242.827586207 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15879828326 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12911741313 2.71678728327 115% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 139.433497537 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605150214592 0.580463131201 104% => OK
syllable_count: 390.6 379.143842365 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.325123152709 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 12.6551724138 40% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 46.0 20.5024630542 224% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 109.41590378 50.4703680194 217% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 240.4 104.977214359 229% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 46.6 20.9669160288 222% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 18.8 7.25397266985 259% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.33497536946 150% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0862518879087 0.242375264174 36% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.046505963351 0.0925447433944 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0485738414142 0.071462118173 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0547486227292 0.151781067708 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0482335385198 0.0609392437508 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 26.2 12.6369458128 207% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 16.33 53.1260098522 31% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.54236453202 199% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.4 10.9458128079 205% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.54 11.5310837438 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.0 8.32886699507 132% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 55.0591133005 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.94827586207 201% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 20.4 10.3980295567 196% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 10.5123152709 190% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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