In the last centuries, humankind had invented the numerous life-changing discoveries and inventions, such as antibiotics, an aircraft and the computer. Although the all of them is vital in modern life, I believe that the computer is the greatest invention among others. This essay will discuss the importance of the computer in science and modern people's life.
To begin with, the computer was played the critical role in the development of scientific subjects and it was impossible to innovate modern scientific achievements particularly in medical science. For example, the computer tomography is the invaluable invention using the computer technology in medical science. Moreover, the computer has the power to investigate and to treat the diseases itself.
In addition, the computer becomes one of the essential parts of our lives and the life without the computer is unimaginable. For example, people receive their bills by email, to shop online, do meetings via online conferencing software. Moreover, the computer enhances our performance and efficiency in various levels through its powerful technological capabilities.
In conclusion, the last century was the greatest period of humankind development. In my opinion, the computer is undoubtedly the greatest invention of the period for both scientifically and ordinary people's life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 6.10837438424 16% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 5.94088669951 17% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 20.9802955665 52% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 31.9359605911 85% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.75862068966 191% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1153.0 1207.87684729 95% => OK
No of words: 202.0 242.827586207 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.70792079208 5.00649968141 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.92707691288 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16161497251 2.71678728327 116% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 139.433497537 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574257425743 0.580463131201 99% => OK
syllable_count: 361.8 379.143842365 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.325123152709 0% => OK
Article: 8.0 1.56157635468 512% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.1888409796 50.4703680194 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.818181818 104.977214359 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3636363636 20.9669160288 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.72727272727 7.25397266985 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0925154663075 0.242375264174 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0394425798635 0.0925447433944 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0410654429497 0.071462118173 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0601797870676 0.151781067708 40% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0302392810702 0.0609392437508 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 12.6369458128 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 53.1260098522 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.84 11.5310837438 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.53 8.32886699507 114% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 55.0591133005 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 55.0 Out of 90
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