Many people think regions affect successful persons. What is your opinion about native regions and accomplished person influence on the regions they belong to?
Different regions from where successful individual hailed always have an influence over them; however only regions don’t make people triumphant, it requires uphill struggle, determination, focus and goal-directed approaches but still, the person always represents his region. In my opinion, both region and individual are complimentary to each other in several ways.
Every region has uniqueness in the form of culture, traditions, values and beliefs, so the offsprings hailed from such region have specialised characteristics in them and which stimulate them to acquire positive outcome in regard to education and career.
On the other hand, accomplished people also have a significant impact on the native area they belong to as they bring proud for the whole region and many adolescents also get motivated by them and initiate objectively oriented behaviour to attain their goals. They become role models for the youngsters and older people tell their stories of success to instil paramount qualities in their children and to catalyse the surge of fortitude.
In short, we can’t be detached from the area we born into because knowingly or unknowingly we gained a lot from it, and our every deed is going to represent our area as a whole in front of the world. Our activities also have a direct influence on our youngsters in that region, so we will always be accountable for our nation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 256, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...come in regard to education and career. On the other hand, accomplished people a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, still, in short, in my opinion, in regard to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 10.5418719212 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 20.9802955665 114% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 31.9359605911 91% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1188.0 1207.87684729 98% => OK
No of words: 225.0 242.827586207 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92360676959 2.71678728327 108% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 139.433497537 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626666666667 0.580463131201 108% => OK
syllable_count: 372.6 379.143842365 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.325123152709 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6551724138 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.5024630542 156% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.4440842102 50.4703680194 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 169.714285714 104.977214359 162% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.1428571429 20.9669160288 153% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.0 7.25397266985 179% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288881247704 0.242375264174 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130125207509 0.0925447433944 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.080578456941 0.071462118173 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166045523561 0.151781067708 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0879958757426 0.0609392437508 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.5 12.6369458128 154% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.54 53.1260098522 57% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.0 10.9458128079 155% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.94 11.5310837438 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.0 8.32886699507 120% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 55.0591133005 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.94827586207 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.3980295567 142% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 10.5123152709 190% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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