In the past 100 years, there have been many inventions such as antibiotics, airplanes and computers. What do you think is the most important of them? Why? Greatest invention in the last 100 years, medicine, science or technology
These days there is an ongoing debate between people about which is greatest invention medicine, science or technology. While it is possible to claim that invention in any industry will have more impact on human lives, my view is that invention in technology has advantages than the other. In this essay I shall explain my point of view by analyzing both sides of argument.
There are several reasons why technology inventions are great than other inventions. One of them is that technology inventions made our life easier. It can also be argued with that technology inventions will help other industry invention such as medicine, aerospace, defense, financial, chemical industry etc. it should also be taken into the account that people can able to their day-to-day activities easily by technology inventions. For example, they can order food, cloth, vegetables through online. they can send or receive money anywhere at any time. The invention of block chain technology will serve for financial industry.
Those who argue for medicine, science inventions is greatest than technology have different view and say that it can be actually a good thing. Firstly, it is claimed that inventions in medicine will have direct impact on human lives. Then there are concerns about too many inventions at technology represents the laziness of the people.
While there are strong arguments on both sides of case, my opinion is that technology inventions are greater than the other. I would strongly recommend that inventions of any field have to be used in right way.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, first, firstly, if, so, then, while, as to, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 10.5418719212 161% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 6.10837438424 196% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 8.36945812808 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 5.94088669951 185% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 20.9802955665 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 31.9359605911 91% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1311.0 1207.87684729 109% => OK
No of words: 247.0 242.827586207 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30769230769 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.43205713978 2.71678728327 126% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 139.433497537 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558704453441 0.580463131201 96% => OK
syllable_count: 414.9 379.143842365 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 4.6157635468 217% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6551724138 126% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.5024630542 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.0166304686 50.4703680194 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 81.9375 104.977214359 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4375 20.9669160288 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.25397266985 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.33497536946 187% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219567306518 0.242375264174 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0830718072542 0.0925447433944 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0507961094129 0.071462118173 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145804644937 0.151781067708 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0370959290463 0.0609392437508 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 12.6369458128 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 53.1260098522 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.22 11.5310837438 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.32 8.32886699507 88% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 55.0591133005 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.3980295567 77% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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