People are moving to urban area from rural area for better life. What are the advantage and disadvantage of living in urban area and rural areas?
Surely there has been no time in history where the lives in of people have changed more daramatically.A quick reflection on typical day revels such a people are moving to urban area from rural area for better life has been the one of most prominent topic in the contemporary discussion people have always been intrigued to analyze and explain regarding this I would say.
To begin with, People are moving to urban area from rural area for better life because there more facilities in urban area for example people are gives the easy job and increase the standard of life. Urban area is providing the medical facilities very easily because in these days every people are not surviving with medicine mostly old life person. But people are migrating in urban area to rural area with which increase the environment issues in urban areas.
On the other hand, in rural area people are face the more and more problem like medicine facilities and rural people has to go for far from their home for getting education. But rural area is providing the fresh air.
In conclusion, I firmly believe that every coin has two aspects. Urban area provides more facilities rather than rural areas, but it depends on an individual whether he prefer to live in village or city.
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Suggestion: prefers
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...r he prefer to live in village or city.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, regarding, so, as to, for example, in conclusion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 6.10837438424 16% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 20.9802955665 38% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1048.0 1207.87684729 87% => OK
No of words: 218.0 242.827586207 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80733944954 5.00649968141 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34483998516 2.71678728327 86% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 139.433497537 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.54128440367 0.580463131201 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 358.2 379.143842365 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6551724138 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.5024630542 132% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 94.730868781 50.4703680194 188% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.0 104.977214359 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.25 20.9669160288 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.375 7.25397266985 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.615868172237 0.242375264174 254% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.308367711423 0.0925447433944 333% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.170459394282 0.071462118173 239% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.376040465125 0.151781067708 248% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.140679516106 0.0609392437508 231% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 12.6369458128 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 53.1260098522 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.9458128079 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 11.5310837438 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.32886699507 98% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 55.0591133005 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 27.0 9.94827586207 271% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.3980295567 123% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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