People attend colleges or universities for many different reasons (for example, new experiences, career preparation, increased knowledge etc.). Why do you think people attend colleges or universities?
You should give reasons for your answer using your ideas and experience.
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Write at least 250 words.
Education is an essential part of the modern world. Nowadays, people prefer to join institutes for several distinct reasons like as career preparation, enhanced knowledge, and new experience. According to my viewpoint, people attend the universities to fulfil their own desires. In this essay, I will further elaborate the reasons why the people enrol in the higher learning institutes.
At the outset, there are numerous reasons that motivate the people to go to the colleges. The most preponderant one stems from the fact that by going to university people can get the knowledge about different projects that are not covered at the primary education level. For example, during my masters, I participated in an advanced project that helped me to incline my knowledge about the information technology. Therefore, the university education plays a vital role in increasing the knowledge of an individual.
Furthermore, few people attend the colleges to get the new experience and to prepare for their career. This is because the university provides the learner an open environment, where students can generate new ideas by participating in group discussions and volunteer works that they can later utilise in their career field. As an illustration, the learners can add the volunteer work experience in their resume to add more value to get a better job. Hence, it is apparent why people attend universities for career preparation and new experience.
In view of arguments outlined above, one can conclude that the people have different motives to attend universities and colleges according to their own needs and interest.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2019-02-19 | Sudan Bhattarai | 80 | view |
| 2018-12-05 | RAVI.SHANKAR | 72 | view |
| 2018-09-18 | AKSHITg | 55 | view |
| 2018-09-18 | AKSHITg | 65 | view |
| 2018-08-28 | Alka | 77 | view |
- Certain kinds of music promote learning in children life. Do you agree or disagree? 77
- Some people think that it is important to use leisure time for activities that develop the mind, such as reading and doing crossword puzzles, other people feel it is important to rest the mind during leisure time. Discuss your opinion.? 77
- Having a balanced diet and eating balanced meals is the key to a healthy life.To what extent do you agree or disagree? 85
- What are the advantages and disadvantages of living in an era in which new things are constantly being invented? 77
- Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of advertisements 75
Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, hence, if, so, therefore, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 10.5418719212 47% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 5.75862068966 208% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1376.0 1207.87684729 114% => OK
No of words: 257.0 242.827586207 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35408560311 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98760732259 2.71678728327 110% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 139.433497537 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548638132296 0.580463131201 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 441.9 379.143842365 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.9450975381 50.4703680194 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.846153846 104.977214359 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7692307692 20.9669160288 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.84615384615 7.25397266985 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 2.91625615764 240% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.34650791109 0.242375264174 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131354978415 0.0925447433944 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0942170768753 0.071462118173 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.206926847555 0.151781067708 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0373832302404 0.0609392437508 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 12.6369458128 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 53.1260098522 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 11.5310837438 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.31 8.32886699507 112% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 55.0591133005 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.