People emphasizing government to build an advanced transport system rather new road for vehicles that are overcrowding the cities. Do you agree or disagree?
it is irrefutable to say that, the transport system is the true picture of a developed country and it shows how advanced a country is. Some people believe that the government should focus more on building a better transport system with the latest technology, while others opine that developing the new roads is the most important. I am inclined towards building an advanced transport system.
Firstly, an increasing number of vehicles on roads are causing pollution, which further leads to add value in global warming. In addition, an increased number of cars, trucks, and vans on roads is also one of the reasons for road accidents which takes hundreds of lives every year. For example, the number of road accidents in Singapore is less than in Australia. Instead of focusing on building roads, the government should focus on the transport system.
Furthermore, a good transport system will not only be cheaper than owning a car but it will help to keep the environment clean. The government should provide a good transport system for the commute to its citizen because this is the only way a government can reduce the number of other transports owned by the people. For example, if a local transport of the city will be fast, punctual and cheap than people will not buy cars.
To recapitulate the foregoing discussion, developing an advanced transport system is important than roads for vehicles. In my opinion, the government should focus more on local transport than building roads for vehicles.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
it is irrefutable to say that, the transpo...
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Line 3, column 187, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...uld provide a good transport system for the commute to its citizen because this is the only...
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Line 3, column 335, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'local transport'.
Suggestion: local transport
...ts owned by the people. For example, if a local transport of the city will be fast, punctual and ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, so, while, for example, in addition, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 20.9802955665 48% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 31.9359605911 85% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1257.0 1207.87684729 104% => OK
No of words: 250.0 242.827586207 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.028 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71658903775 2.71678728327 100% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 139.433497537 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.52 0.580463131201 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 375.3 379.143842365 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 8.0 1.56157635468 512% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.9403924822 50.4703680194 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.75 104.977214359 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8333333333 20.9669160288 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.83333333333 7.25397266985 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0117049360199 0.242375264174 5% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00554540693835 0.0925447433944 6% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0183920341243 0.071462118173 26% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0070273774758 0.151781067708 5% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.012171774832 0.0609392437508 20% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 12.6369458128 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 53.1260098522 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 11.5310837438 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.32886699507 93% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 55.0591133005 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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