people's shopping habits depend on their age group than by any other factors. Agree or disagree.
One of the most conspicuous trends in today's world is a colossal upsurge in the most people believing that people's shopping habits depend on their age group other than any other factors. This is a wide spread worry that this will lead to a myriad of concerns in individual life. However, I do not accept entirely and I will explain why in this essay.
There are a number of arguments in favour of my stance. The most preponderant one is that the shopping nature is not only contribute to increase the economy of the country, but also provide numerous other benefits to various fields. Thanks to the wide range of advantages it offers, but not only one benefit more when it comes to being effective, they can also enhance the productivity and quality of their lives, with much ease, efficacy and convenience. Needless to say, all these merits are stand one in good stead, as far as augmenting their chances to prosperity and excellence is concerned. Also it increases the people’s desire satisfaction and make their life ease.
Another pivotal aforementioned proposition is that, this can only likely to help one excel and thrive in varied areas. Besides, only when one follow such system, it can help to broaden their horizons, thus learning such essential attributes such as responsibility, dedication and perseverance. Hence, it is apparent why more are in favour of this topic. For example, Western University from Australia reveals the fact that less than 40 years are doing more shopping than others.
In the view of above outlined, one can conclude that the benefits of people's shopping habits may be vary depending on their age is indeed too great to ignore.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 597, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...prosperity and excellence is concerned. Also it increases the people’s desire satisf...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, hence, however, if, may, so, thus, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 20.9802955665 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1390.0 1207.87684729 115% => OK
No of words: 283.0 242.827586207 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91166077739 5.00649968141 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68693471725 2.71678728327 99% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 139.433497537 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586572438163 0.580463131201 101% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 379.143842365 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.8703435923 50.4703680194 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.923076923 104.977214359 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7692307692 20.9669160288 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.76923076923 7.25397266985 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26287973163 0.242375264174 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0826553986425 0.0925447433944 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.127872123579 0.071462118173 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175099886618 0.151781067708 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0976575367411 0.0609392437508 160% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 12.6369458128 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 53.1260098522 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 11.5310837438 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.32886699507 108% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 55.0591133005 142% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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