Nowadays, Jobs are becoming demanding and require longer working hours, due to which people usually mix their private and professional life. Some people say that mixing their private and professional life has multiple benefits, but I sanguinely believe that people should keep their private and public life separate. This essay will further elaborate reasons support this notion and then deduce a logical conclusion.
At the outset, conspicuously, there are myriads of reasons to support this notion but one of the most compelling reason is that mixing the private and personal life can damage once private life. As this can lead to misunderstanding hence the people should refrain from doing so.
On the contrary, there are skeptics who conjecture that mixing the private and personal has benefits, due to the long working hours people do not have much time, and this help people keep in touch with each other. Although it seems ostensibly veridical this is not true. as mixing private and personal life would create more of conflict then it helps, hence it is suggested not to mix the private and personal life.
After analyzing the above points, I would like to recapitulate that mixing of the private and personal life should not be done as it can develop the conflict among the couple.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...p people keep in touch with each other. Although it seems ostensibly veridical this is n...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: As
... ostensibly veridical this is not true. as mixing private and personal life would ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, so, then, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 8.36945812808 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 31.9359605911 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 5.75862068966 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1090.0 1207.87684729 90% => OK
No of words: 214.0 242.827586207 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09345794393 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 3.92707691288 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52272404472 2.71678728327 93% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 139.433497537 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.532710280374 0.580463131201 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 339.3 379.143842365 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.1740181644 50.4703680194 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.111111111 104.977214359 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7777777778 20.9669160288 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.55555555556 7.25397266985 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.394874621777 0.242375264174 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.172978852528 0.0925447433944 187% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.146913249207 0.071462118173 206% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.244340717608 0.151781067708 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.120895033265 0.0609392437508 198% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 12.6369458128 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 53.1260098522 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 11.5310837438 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.32886699507 95% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 55.0591133005 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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