Personal development is the base for professional development and advancing in one’s career. To what extent do you agree and disagree?
Now in modern era, personal development is the base of professional development. With the help of the personal development people learn many things and it advancing one’s in career. I will agree with this statement of professional developments. I will shed light on these views in upcoming paragraphs before suitable conclusion.
To begin with, there are numerous benefits of the personal development in human life. With the help of personal development person learns new skills like how to communicate with other people. Furthermore, these developments are needed of every human because when they have these developments they achieve good success in life. Moreover, schools or colleges are helping to increase personality of developments in students which is good for them and to make good carrier of the students.
In addition, the personal developments are the base of the professional developments. With the help of these developments human’s life are advancing in short period of time. Also, all people not have these types of development and some are learn these developments from their parents as well from their elders.
To conclude, I opine that these developments is very beneficial for human beings and I suggest that individuals learn more and more about these personal development.
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Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'learned', 'learnt'.
Suggestion: learned; learnt
...these types of development and some are learn these developments from their parents a...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ividuals learn more and more about these personal development.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, moreover, so, well, in addition, in short, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1112.0 1207.87684729 92% => OK
No of words: 204.0 242.827586207 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45098039216 5.00649968141 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 3.92707691288 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10611073135 2.71678728327 114% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 139.433497537 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.53431372549 0.580463131201 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 350.1 379.143842365 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.8576477823 50.4703680194 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.6666666667 104.977214359 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.9669160288 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.58333333333 7.25397266985 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.349897409979 0.242375264174 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.160329783924 0.0925447433944 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0940167049861 0.071462118173 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.228963379026 0.151781067708 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0785899161094 0.0609392437508 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 12.6369458128 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 53.1260098522 86% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.03 11.5310837438 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.32886699507 96% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 55.0591133005 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.94827586207 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 55.0 Out of 90
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