Personal Development is the base for professional development and advancing in one’s career. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
One of the conspicuous trends in today’s world is a colossal upsurge in the number of people believing that personal development is the base for professional development. There is a widespread worry that this will lead to a myriad of concerns in one’s life. However, I do not entirely accept this and I will explain why in this essay.
There are a number of arguments in favour of my stance. Most preponderant one is that personal development can not only contribute to professional development but also lead to numerous other benefits in various fields. Thanks to wide range of advantages it offers, not only one benefit more when it comes to being effective, but they can enhance productivity and quality of their lives, with much ease, efficacy, and convenience. Needless to say, all these merits stand one in good stead, as far as augmenting the chances of prosperity and excellence are concerned.
There are, however, some pitfalls that can easily overwhelm the potential benefits of tourism. The primary one stems from the fact that by observing the aforementioned trend, people have not only realized its gravity, but also gauged the magnitude of its repercussion when it comes to today’s ever-changing lifestyle. Besides, its impact on the economy of the country is far-reaching indeed. Hence, it is apparent why many are in against tourism.
In the views of arguments outlined above, one can conclude that despite some drawbacks the benefits of tourism are indeed too great to ignore.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 91, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...conclude that despite some drawbacks the benefits of tourism are indeed too great...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, hence, however, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1273.0 1207.87684729 105% => OK
No of words: 247.0 242.827586207 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15384615385 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97470307176 2.71678728327 109% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 139.433497537 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582995951417 0.580463131201 100% => OK
syllable_count: 409.5 379.143842365 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.0693413509 50.4703680194 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.083333333 104.977214359 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5833333333 20.9669160288 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 7.25397266985 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203493128921 0.242375264174 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0659817985645 0.0925447433944 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0952011934583 0.071462118173 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112402346024 0.151781067708 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0878847722431 0.0609392437508 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 12.6369458128 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 53.1260098522 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 11.5310837438 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.32886699507 109% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 55.0591133005 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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