personal development is the base for professional development and advancing in one's career. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In the modern era, Inner skills are the first step for professional development for everyone’s career. I partly agree with the given statement because both developments have equally participated in everyone’s career. I would discuss the advantage and disadvantage of personal development in the following paragraphs.
To start with, personal development increases a person’s personalities. In other words, if a person has interpersonal skill so they can do multiple works. As a result, this skill will help to increases a person's personalities as well as their fame and name in their company. For example, communication skill help to attract more customers towards the company as a result company will enhance their financial growth.
On the other hand, the educational and industrial experience is more required instead of personal development. Furthermore, if a person doesn’t have a qualification degree so they cannot get the promotion to the particular sector. For example, in the hotel industry, people may work with personal skill but they did not get promotion as a managerial level because they don't have a professional degree.
Too, conclude, Having personal development add prestige in a person’s life but in my point of view educational developments are more useful for people to achieved higher level of the nation as well on their company too.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 198, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'increase'.
Suggestion: increase
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Line 7, column 375, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...tion as a managerial level because they dont have a professional degree. Too, con...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, may, so, well, for example, as a result, as well as, in other words, to start with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 10.5418719212 28% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 5.94088669951 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 20.9802955665 57% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 31.9359605911 69% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 5.75862068966 208% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1181.0 1207.87684729 98% => OK
No of words: 214.0 242.827586207 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.51869158879 5.00649968141 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 3.92707691288 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.36622488812 2.71678728327 124% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 139.433497537 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.570093457944 0.580463131201 98% => OK
syllable_count: 372.6 379.143842365 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.0099161263 50.4703680194 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.363636364 104.977214359 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4545454545 20.9669160288 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.8181818182 7.25397266985 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253406059356 0.242375264174 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109349523019 0.0925447433944 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0674017988143 0.071462118173 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168318932033 0.151781067708 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0749353422481 0.0609392437508 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 12.6369458128 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 53.1260098522 82% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 11.5310837438 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.32886699507 100% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 55.0591133005 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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