Personal development is the base for professional development. To what extent do you agree?
Surely there has been no time in history where the lives of people have changed more dramatically. A quick reflection on typical day reveal is personal development has been one of the prominent topic in contemporary discussions. People have always been intrigued to analyze and explain to improve interpersonal skills regarding this I would like to say my viewpoint in upcoming paragraph.
On the one hand, we can enhance our Talent and can be opted as a career and can also helpful in building our confidence. We can also enhance our mentally and physically development. People get aware about the different ways to deal with customers. As a case in point if we get training from coach it is our personal development and it also converted into the professional development.
On the other hand, some people say that the personal development is depend upon our performance and also depends upon the hard work. Also, it also depends on us whether how to use our ability and skills in order to built a bright future.
In conclusion, I would like to say that the personal development is a crucial part and it does not depend upon only hard work or skills of individual. Therefore, everyone should be focus on polishing their skills foe reaching good height in their life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'depended'.
Suggestion: depended
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Line 4, column 181, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'focused', 'focussed'?
Suggestion: focused; focussed
...dividual. Therefore, everyone should be focus on polishing their skills foe reaching...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, regarding, so, therefore, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.75862068966 191% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1055.0 1207.87684729 87% => OK
No of words: 218.0 242.827586207 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83944954128 5.00649968141 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8369436557 2.71678728327 104% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 139.433497537 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.573394495413 0.580463131201 99% => OK
syllable_count: 340.2 379.143842365 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.4614646143 50.4703680194 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.9090909091 104.977214359 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8181818182 20.9669160288 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.18181818182 7.25397266985 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.104486394708 0.242375264174 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.044733227691 0.0925447433944 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0578789606865 0.071462118173 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0593455833101 0.151781067708 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0182288311132 0.0609392437508 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 12.6369458128 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.1260098522 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 11.5310837438 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.32886699507 95% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 55.0591133005 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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