Q:- While people throughout the world are struggling with hunger, many rich people are spending too much on their pets . Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of keeping pets.
Surely there has no time in history where the lives of people have changed more dramatically. A quick reflection on the typical day reveals people spend too much money on keeping pets has been one of the most prominent topics on the contemporary discussion. I will discuss merits and demrits of keeping pets at home in further elaborating paragraphs.
To commence with, there are plethora of advantage of keeping pets at home. Firstly, pet is a faithful and friendly with human being as most of the people spend much money to take care of pets. Moreover, pets provide the secruity and sympathy which they can secure the property of human as well as they protect any dangerous situation. Furthermore, majority of people have hobby to keeping pets and they have spend most of time with it. Pets act like as a friend so children can play with pets without any fear.
On the other hand, there are enormous demerits of keeping pets. Firstly, masses utilised money for taking care of pets and thier feed so it is totaly a wastage of money. Moreover, some breed of pets have dangerous eventually they harm human in which some fatal diseases are spread by dogs.
To conculde, masess spend lot of money for keeping pets at home but many people are struggling with hunger so it is the responsibility of individuals as well as government should distributed money into poor people rather than to spend on pets.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use past participle here: 'spent'.
Suggestion: spent
...ave hobby to keeping pets and they have spend most of time with it. Pets act like as...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...obby to keeping pets and they have spend most of time with it. Pets act like as a...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... which some fatal diseases are spread by dogs. To conculde, masess spend lot of...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, moreover, so, well, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 20.9802955665 38% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 31.9359605911 128% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1158.0 1207.87684729 96% => OK
No of words: 244.0 242.827586207 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74590163934 5.00649968141 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52937591954 2.71678728327 93% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 139.433497537 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.536885245902 0.580463131201 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 367.2 379.143842365 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.2272873101 50.4703680194 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.5 104.977214359 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3333333333 20.9669160288 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.91666666667 7.25397266985 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.349204184348 0.242375264174 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132546200452 0.0925447433944 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0896577385092 0.071462118173 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.218749720946 0.151781067708 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0887838336812 0.0609392437508 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 12.6369458128 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 53.1260098522 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.27 11.5310837438 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.32886699507 93% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 55.0591133005 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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