Recently the freedom to work and live anywhere has become the main trend due to the development of communication technology and transportation What are the advantages and disadvantages

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Recently the freedom to work and live anywhere has become the main trend due to the
development of communication technology and transportation. What are the advantages and
disadvantages?

The world has started moving towards a high range of development ranging closely in communication
and transportation, In my opinion, such progress has helped the people to utilize this freedom to
develop themselves socially, and economically weighing the advantages and disadvantages for a better
lifestyle. This unprecedented success that mankind has achieved has diminished the gaps by
bringing different communities together
Firstly, the accessibility to communication has helped students and adults to identify better
educational and job opportunities for themselves thus, helping them to form a better lifestyle.
Socially and economically the freedom of technology and transportation has brought together
people of various nationalities to come together, fill in their ideas to develop for themselves and
their nation. People have achieved a triumph over their long-distance journeys to meet their loved
ones in a day or two’s travel time.
Moreover, It also has its downside, when people have to move to different countries they face
common issues of adaptation, language barrier, climate, food, and health-related concerns. With
industrialization at its peak, there is another disadvantage of cheap labor accessibility. Since work is
nowadays not limited to just the office people are putting in more effort and time to fulfill their work
life.
To put it in a nutshell, the freedom to work and live has its merits and demerits, one should always
make a mindful choice when it comes to utilizing the freedom for their betterment. Although it is the
flip side of the coin the outcome will always help the individual to enrich their full potential according to
their surroundings.

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Average: 7.8 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...izing the freedom for their betterment. Although it is the flip side of the coin the ou...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, moreover, so, thus, as to, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 10.5418719212 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 8.36945812808 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 20.9802955665 114% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1463.0 1207.87684729 121% => OK
No of words: 261.0 242.827586207 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.60536398467 5.00649968141 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.24292781142 2.71678728327 119% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 139.433497537 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60153256705 0.580463131201 104% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 379.143842365 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.5024630542 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 73.3632935432 50.4703680194 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 162.555555556 104.977214359 155% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.0 20.9669160288 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 7.25397266985 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 18.0 4.12807881773 436% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145741128055 0.242375264174 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0572012281001 0.0925447433944 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0550194154493 0.071462118173 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0450772511549 0.151781067708 30% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0535282392672 0.0609392437508 88% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.5 12.6369458128 154% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.58 53.1260098522 63% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 6.54236453202 199% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 10.9458128079 144% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.85 11.5310837438 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.85 8.32886699507 118% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 55.0591133005 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 23.0 9.94827586207 231% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.3980295567 131% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.5123152709 152% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 78.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 71.0 Out of 90
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