As a result of advances in medical care, average life expectancy is increasing for men and women. Do you think most people will see this as a positive development? What are the disadvantages of an ageing population for individuals and society? Support you

In the age of technology, the aging of the population is increasing rapidly with the help of medicine and with the boon of technology. This has become a highly debated topic in society or in an individual because they have their own opinion related to the content. I personally believe that everything has their own pros and cons. In this essay, I'll discuss both the aspect and conclude my view.

Firstly, the increasing of the aging population is beneficial for a society or any group sector because they are the most experienced and well-known people of the society which is a good learning source for the young star. Apart from this, Industry, University or any education sector or governing sector, they are most experienced and can easily lead and help their subordinate which is much beneficial. For example; TATA group industry of India has only aged staff in top-level and they are the strength of the company due to the company never fail, they believe.

In other hand, people mean the retired people of their job by the government. So, for these type of people government have to make new budge or provide facility like old-pension, etc... But it also needs to consider that these people are well known about the history and are accountable for the upcoming generation. They can tech or experience to their upbringing population about culture and tradition.

Thus, in conclusion, I think there are no rights to say that who should be alive or should age people enjoy life with the help of medical care.

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Average: 8 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
...their own pros and cons. In this essay, Ill discuss both the aspect and conclude my...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, so, thus, well, apart from, for example, i think, in conclusion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 8.36945812808 203% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 20.9802955665 110% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1262.0 1207.87684729 104% => OK
No of words: 260.0 242.827586207 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85384615385 5.00649968141 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6050133732 2.71678728327 96% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 139.433497537 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565384615385 0.580463131201 97% => OK
syllable_count: 403.2 379.143842365 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.1877208309 50.4703680194 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.166666667 104.977214359 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6666666667 20.9669160288 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.83333333333 7.25397266985 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223950757118 0.242375264174 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0730413506295 0.0925447433944 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0536787703384 0.071462118173 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125175958839 0.151781067708 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0176577054902 0.0609392437508 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 12.6369458128 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 53.1260098522 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 11.5310837438 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.32886699507 96% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 55.0591133005 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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