Media is the greatest source of information. It plays the vital role in the society to share the opinion of the people and help to reach the voice of the public to the government. Controlling the media is undeniable because it is the source to which public support and trust without any doubt.
Firstly, media have full right to share the information and to criticize the thought in bias to the public, because the public fully depends on the information what they aired and share. But there are some people who control the media and flash what they say in bias to their own. This can effect to the society and people will feel cheated by the politician and media.
I also believe that there is some information which should be in control of the government because it may affect the society. Such as; cinema is the most influencing media in the society so wrong things should not be released, etc. but it is also necessary to know the public of the notion that what is going on in their nation. If somebody is totally controlling the media or doing monopoly those people should be sentence or a law should be made on this.
Therefore, I conclude that the media should not be in control of anybody and they should be free to reveal the news or any types of information without affecting anyone. Media must remember that they are very responsible for building a good society or a nation.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 415, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'sentenced'?
Suggestion: sentenced
...r doing monopoly those people should be sentence or a law should be made on this. There...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, so, therefore, as to, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.5418719212 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 6.10837438424 164% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 8.36945812808 167% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1141.0 1207.87684729 94% => OK
No of words: 250.0 242.827586207 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.564 5.00649968141 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43001563781 2.71678728327 89% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 139.433497537 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.484 0.580463131201 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 358.2 379.143842365 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.57093596059 89% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 3.65517241379 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.34355743 50.4703680194 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.0833333333 104.977214359 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8333333333 20.9669160288 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.41666666667 7.25397266985 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.300460357028 0.242375264174 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116159479454 0.0925447433944 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0689112764376 0.071462118173 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183300502168 0.151781067708 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0427574886034 0.0609392437508 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 12.6369458128 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 53.1260098522 128% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.9458128079 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.17 11.5310837438 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.22 8.32886699507 87% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 55.0591133005 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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