Some types of employment are more suitable for men and other types of employment are more appropriate for women.'To what extent do you agree with this statement? Support your point of view with reasons and examples from your own experience.

In this days, there is an opinion that some types fo employment are fitted for men and some of the jobs are proper for women. Although some people believe women are able to do many hard works, it is better for them to do lighter works. For the purpose of this essay, I would discuss why I agree with this statement.
To begin with, there are various reasons to support this view and divide employments into man's works and women's jobs. At first, although women have the ability to many things, they can do lighter works due to their body condition. there are many works that women are not capable to do. For example, working in mines and replacing heavy things are hard works and are harmful to women as well as in man's power.
In addition, there are some works that are not suitable for men. Some of the works need to elegance and feminine mood. the kindergarten trainer is one of the appropriate jobs for women. For instance, a recent research conducted by MYT University researchers in 2016 shows that a significant number of primary schools in advanced countries are using female teachers because of their positive effects on breeding due to their patience and elegance mood.
In conclusion, while there are several compelling arguments about this viewpoint, my personal sentiment is that jobs should be classified into two groups, some types suitable for women and the other types are appropriate for men.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as well as, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 10.5418719212 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1168.0 1207.87684729 97% => OK
No of words: 245.0 242.827586207 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76734693878 5.00649968141 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41829759651 2.71678728327 89% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 139.433497537 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555102040816 0.580463131201 96% => OK
syllable_count: 369.0 379.143842365 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.2509727553 50.4703680194 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.3333333333 104.977214359 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4166666667 20.9669160288 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.25397266985 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.337045015227 0.242375264174 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.135077434715 0.0925447433944 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0876920029984 0.071462118173 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.210987208034 0.151781067708 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0799773731168 0.0609392437508 131% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 12.6369458128 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 53.1260098522 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 11.5310837438 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.32886699507 100% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 55.0591133005 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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