With the rise in use of internet facilities results in generation of several problems in our society. Discuss the problems and its solutions?
One of the most conspicuous trends of today’s world is a colossal upsurge in the use of internet around the globe. However, with the wide range usage of internet which results in various causes in the society. This essay, I will discuss the problems behind this phenomenon and also few solution to talks this issue.
To embark with, numerous factors are associated to negative consequences of the internet. The most prominent is physical and psychological effects as more and more youngsters surf on internet for whole days and they sacrifice their sleeping hour due to this they become a victim of stress and various diseases. What is more, some people use internet for hacking which they hack individual’s personal data and show them in front of world. For instance, According to survey of daily hunt news, 25% of computer hacker earn money by hacking social as well as banking sites.
Nevertheless, there are also few solutions to short out these problems. The first and foremost is children should use internet under the supervision of their parents and they should encourage their kids about sports and exercises which led to them fit as fiddle. Needless to say, to keep safe our personal data, we can create a personal account with the help of cyber security.
To conclude, I firmly believe, undoubtedly, internet play a important role in our lives as it’s a part and parcel of our society. However, this trend also put some problems among the society which are unavoidable.
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| 2019-06-05 | Majheal Singh | 77 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 288, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun solution seems to be countable; consider using: 'few solutions'.
Suggestion: few solutions
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Line 7, column 59, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, nevertheless, so, well, for instance, as well as, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1259.0 1207.87684729 104% => OK
No of words: 250.0 242.827586207 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.036 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70762183475 2.71678728327 100% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 139.433497537 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612 0.580463131201 105% => OK
syllable_count: 387.9 379.143842365 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.7002364768 50.4703680194 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.916666667 104.977214359 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8333333333 20.9669160288 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 7.25397266985 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225160172249 0.242375264174 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0768133977655 0.0925447433944 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0474382577325 0.071462118173 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139941058662 0.151781067708 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0654200818294 0.0609392437508 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 12.6369458128 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.1260098522 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 11.5310837438 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.32886699507 106% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 55.0591133005 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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