'Schools should prepare students for university, rather than for work.' How far do you agree with this statement? Support your point of view with reasons and/or examples from your own experience or observations.
These days, there is ongoing debate among people think about students benefit from going to private schools. While it is possible to claim that other, however feel that private secondary schools can have negative effect on society as a whole, my view is that the disadvantages outweigh the advantages in this essay, I will explain my point of view by analyzing both sides of my arguments.
there are several reasons why the private schools are very expensive and out of budget and extra expensive like Bus charge, costly dresses. One of them is that such as rich people send their children to school for study. It should be also taken into account that some middle class students has following the rich people behavior .For example are buying steep price of motor bike and car for going to schools. Means this a wastage of money
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, second, so, while, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 8.36945812808 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 31.9359605911 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 5.75862068966 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 688.0 1207.87684729 57% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 144.0 242.827586207 59% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77777777778 5.00649968141 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.46410161514 3.92707691288 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.25 2.71678728327 83% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 139.433497537 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.715277777778 0.580463131201 123% => OK
syllable_count: 214.2 379.143842365 56% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.65517241379 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6551724138 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 79.9049782902 50.4703680194 158% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.666666667 104.977214359 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.9669160288 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.25397266985 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.12807881773 48% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154000235914 0.242375264174 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0657189434507 0.0925447433944 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0284161907645 0.071462118173 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111634321559 0.151781067708 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0305388037282 0.0609392437508 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 12.6369458128 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 53.1260098522 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.74 11.5310837438 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.32886699507 95% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 55.0591133005 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.94827586207 136% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 200 words wanted.
Rates: 22.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 90
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