Should the authorities from big cities around the world discourage citizens from using private cars and rather encourage them to use other means of transport such as bicycles, skates, the subway, etc.?
Transportation is the necessity of modern era. People use cars, motorcycles and other vehicles to fulfill their daily transport needs. These days, whether to use private cars or not, is becoming a question of debate. In this essay, I will provide my point of view by analyzing both sides of the argument.
Pollution caused by a numerous number of cars is becoming the leading cause for global warming. The emission of various harmful gases; such as carbon dioxide and nitrogen, from an increasing number of cars is playing a vital role in polluting our environment severely. For instance, a study done by the University of Texas showed that the ozone layer, surrounding the earth, is being damaged continuously due to the release of above mentioned hazardous gases. Therefore, making a trend of using personal vehicles is proving injurious to the well-being of the community.
On the other hand, people having their personal cars find an ease to move anywhere when needed. Private cars are being used for transportation as it is the easiest possible way. For example, according to a survey done in the early 21th century in the USA revealed that more than 70% of people secure their time by traveling in their own vehicles. Hence, having one's own car available at home can provide an effective way to save time in today's busy and hectic life.
In a nutshell, the essay discussed deleterious effects of possessing personal ways of transport as well as their possible positive aspects on the society.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 20.9802955665 62% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1256.0 1207.87684729 104% => OK
No of words: 252.0 242.827586207 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98412698413 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71750945661 2.71678728327 100% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 139.433497537 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626984126984 0.580463131201 108% => OK
syllable_count: 403.2 379.143842365 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.7676016115 50.4703680194 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.6153846154 104.977214359 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3846153846 20.9669160288 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.46153846154 7.25397266985 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157078776004 0.242375264174 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0602517866226 0.0925447433944 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0574180797472 0.071462118173 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0883970376475 0.151781067708 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0459869190352 0.0609392437508 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 12.6369458128 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.1260098522 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 11.5310837438 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.72 8.32886699507 117% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 55.0591133005 149% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 80.0 Out of 90
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